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What would the world be like if no one ever had to work another minute to pay for transportation fuel, home heating fuel, and every single business that requires fuel, POWER, no longer had to add that cost to the price of what they sell?

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What would the world be like if no one ever had to work another minute to pay for transportation fuel or home heating fuel and if every single business that requires fuel (POWER) no longer had to add that cost to the price of what they sell?

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What if, instead of spending all that POWER on destroying things to keep the Money Monopoly Fraud Power secure, was instead spent on making more POWER out of less POWER?” —Joe

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What if instead of spending all that POWER on destroying things to keep the Money Monopoly Fraud Power secure, POWER was instead spent on making more POWER out of less POWER?” —Joe

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In that case DOLLARS are being sold. Dollars are being sold, and sold short.

You have dollars, you don't want them, you sell them short, you bet on the dollars becoming worthless. I think that is the general idea of selling short.

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In that case DOLLARS are being sold. Dollars are being sold, and sold short: you have dollars, you don't want them, you sell them short, you bet on the dollars becoming worthless. I think that is the general idea of selling short.

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Ohhhhhhh, I need money.

What?

I need money.

Here have some gold.

Noooooooooo I need money.

Here have some silver.

Noooooooooooo I need money.

Here have some Solar Panels.

Noooooooooooo I need money.

Here have some worthless green paper with numbers printed on it.

HORRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAA! I have MONEY!

What?

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“Ohhhhhhh, I need money.”

“What?”

“I need money.”

“Here, have some gold.”

“Noooooooooo, I need money.”

“Here, have some silver.”

“Noooooooooooo, I need money.”

“Here, have some Solar Panels.”

“Noooooooooooo, I need money.”

“Here, have some worthless green paper with numbers printed on it.”

“HORRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAA! I have MONEY!”

“What?”

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The story was told and I don't know how true it was, and it concerned a 3 Term Presidency for Obama, so I don't put much weight in it.

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The story was told, and I don't know how true it was, but it concerned a 3 Term Presidency for Obama, so I don't put much weight in it.

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I do know that the Central Bankers (Legal Criminals) cause small booms and small busts on a schedule to keep the victims guessing. While the general trend for America is BUST; while the general trend for Asia is BOOM.

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I do know that the Central Bankers (Legal Criminals) cause small booms and small busts -- on a schedule -- to keep the victims guessing: the general trend for America is BUST…while the general trend for Asia is BOOM.

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So an Oil Shale boom in U.S.A. Inc. (LLC) sounds perfectly reasonable, a few years of counterfeit economic growth, throw in a lot of false advertisements on the Major brainwashing networks, and people feel better, feel safe, and the wars appear to be distant, and the TSA Gestapo may be backed off too, who knows?

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So an Oil Shale boom in U.S.A. Inc. (LLC) sounds perfectly reasonable, a few years of counterfeit economic growth, throw in a lot of false advertisements on the Major brainwashing networks, and people feel better, feel safe, and the wars appear to be distant, and the TSA Gestapo may be backed off too. Who knows?

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You call a Solar Panel company, they say yes, and you now have Solar Panels on your house, and you pay less per month for the same electricity.

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You call a Solar Panel company: They say, “Yes,” and you now have Solar Panels on your house, and you pay less per month for the same electricity.

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I think that one of the reasons why a World War is necessary, and America has to be gutted, taken down, is the new age of FREE ENERGY, which is not FREE ENERGY, it is Cost-Less-Power.

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I think that one of the reasons why a World War is necessary and America has to be gutted, taken down, is the new age of FREE ENERGY, which is not FREE ENERGY, it is Cost-Less-Power.

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That is the tune. They, or we, know that we are aiding, contributing, making, causing, driving, escalating, fueling disaster, betting on disaster, but we do it anyway, because we are going to win, relatively speaking, and we have a lot of money to keep safe, so we are finding how to keep a lot of money safe - If we have a lot of money.

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That is the tune. They, or we, know that we are aiding, contributing, making, causing, driving, escalating, fueling disaster, betting on disaster, but we do it anyway because we are going to win, relatively speaking, and we have a lot of money to keep safe, so we are finding how to keep a lot of money safe - If we have a lot of money.

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About 50% of the population, it seems to me, roughly, are duped into thinking that they too are among the rich, when in fact they are merely expendable game pieces, doing useful things. Things needed to keep the Money Monopoly Fraud oiled up.

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About 50% of the population, it seems to me, roughly, are duped into thinking that they too are among the rich. When in fact, they are merely expendable game pieces doing useful things…things needed to keep the Money Monopoly Fraud oiled up.

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Person A is paid some 16,000 Federal Reserve Notes, I'm not sure if I remember the number right, for playing cards at the local Army base most of the time for a month while they are out in the desert, and then it is "show time," and they pretend to be Iraqi citizens, and the Troops pretend to be "spreading democracy" on them.

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Person A is paid some 16,000 Federal Reserve Notes (I'm not sure if I remember the number right) for playing cards at the local Army base most of the time for a month while they are out in the desert, and then it is "show time," and they pretend to be Iraqi citizens, and the Troops pretend to be "spreading democracy" on them.

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So...you have someone joining them, everyone has joined ‘em. If you use dollars, you are a member of the Union, but the level of "interest" is interesting.

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So...you have someone joining them. Everyone has joined ‘em…if you use dollars, you are a member of the Union, but the level of "interest" is interesting.

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"How about that for a chapter title: If you can’t beat them join them and then discuss how joining them actually ruins power/abundance?"

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"How about that for a chapter title: 'If you can’t beat them, join them,’ and then discuss how joining them actually ruins power/abundance?"

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A next step is to pick a pamphlet size, a size of the paper, which makes me think, since I have regular letter paper printers, so that will be a possible determining factor.

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A next step is to pick a pamphlet size, a size of the paper, which makes me think that since I have regular letter paper printers, that will be a possible determining factor.

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JOE, could you please look at this as I think that I have re punctuated in order to keep the meaning as you intended...i.e. genuine democracy which is called mob rule by the counterfeiters.

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You have explained, right there, that which is genuine "democracy" or "mob rule" as the counterfeiters are apt to call it.

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You have explained, right there, that which is genuine "democracy" (or "mob rule" as the counterfeiters are apt to call it).

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"I do though want to maintain value of money. That does not mean that I want to play a market or buy and sell. It would only mean that if I have some money I might want to put it into something that would retain value."

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"I do, though, want to maintain value of money. That does not mean that I want to play a market or buy and sell. It would only mean that, if I have some money, I might want to put it into something that would retain value."

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All that talk about investing in Gold and Silver is talk that is of interest to people who have a lot of accumulated wealth. And my question to anyone with enough wealth to inspire an interest in finding a safe place for it is: how did you get all that power when power is so scarce these days?

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All that talk about investing in Gold and Silver is talk that is of interest to people who have a lot of accumulated wealth. My question to anyone with enough wealth to inspire an interest in finding a safe place for it is, “How did you get all that power when power is so scarce these days?”

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AS WAS:
You have explained, right there, that which is genuine "democracy" or "mob rule" as the counterfeiters are apt to call it.

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You have explained, right there, that which is genuine "democracy" (or "mob rule" as the counterfeiters are apt to call it).
The change is an improvement to me. The genuine democracy is voluntary, and the counterfeit version of democracy is involuntary, or in other words there is a free market version in Liberty and there is a criminal version.






How much would electricity cost if every bomb, missile, military base overseas, solider, food, clothing, supplies shipped overseas, was turned back in time, all the way back to the decision to invade Pennsylvania by Washington in 1794, and instead of that investment in maintaining the Money Monopoly Fraud business, all that POWER was exclusively spent on making Solar Panels, how much would electricity cost per Kilowatt/Hour now?

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How much would electricity cost if every bomb, missile, military base overseas, solider, food, clothing, supplies shipped overseas, was turned back in time…all the way back to the decision to invade Pennsylvania by Washington in 1794…and instead of that investment in maintaining the Money Monopoly Fraud business, what if all that POWER was exclusively spent on making Solar Panels? ow much would electricity cost per Kilowatt/Hour now?
I don't know if the typo is only a Forum typo or a typo in the book word file, the sentence is improved (in my opinion) otherwise.





"If all the Trillions of Dollars Spent on keeping the Monopoly Money Fraud Power maintained (destroying so much in that effort) was spent only on Solar Panels, nothing else, and sold at cost or "given" away -- instead of all that actual, measurable, destruction -- there would be how much production measurable as electricity and whatever was made with electricity?
I want to know why double dashes are used instead of triple periods or parenthesis or comas or single dashes.

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"given" away -- instead of all that actual, measurable, destruction -- there would

2.
"given" away...instead of all that actual, measurable, destruction...there would

3.
"given" away (instead of all that actual, measurable, destruction) there would

4.
"given" away, instead of all that actual, measurable, destruction, there would

5.
"given" away - instead of all that actual, measurable, destruction - there would

Is that the first incidence of using -- ?

I saw improvements in some long sentences with ... replacing comas.

Some of these grammar improvements I am picking up on, but the two dashes are new enough for me to ask for clarification or a link, please.

I hope all is well in bear world.



It is like an education. You buy a book, with your time spent reading it carefully, like the Bible I suppose, (there are very valuable things in the Bible) to help make life much richer.

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It is like an education. You buy a book, and with your time spent reading it carefully, you hope to help make life much richer. (Like the Bible I suppose, there are very valuable things in the Bible.)
I wonder about the need for parenthesis with the long sentence divided into two smaller sentences?





If you buy one solar panel in so many years, you can buy two, and then in so many years you can buy four, and then sixteen…It is a very long term investment…like buying a house, or buying a farm, or buying a productive business.
Is "...It" supposed to be capitalized?

I see you are now working on this, and I know it is very tiring work for me, so I hope you are not suffering through it too much. If you want I can take the file and work on it awhile. I can try to use your routine corrections as far as I know at this point.

Joe,

Do people find winning lottery tickets in the garbage can?

bear,

I don't know, but that sounds like a minor increase in the odds of winning, since the odds of winning are very high, and then adding the odds of finding a lottery ticket in the garbage is even more "lucky" with even higher odds against winning.


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Someone has to be financing the Military Industrial Money Monopoly Complex other than my tax payments, and I don't get anything in return, I don't even get the Social Security I thought was an insurance policy taken out on my behalf in the event that I got sick, which is what happened. And I went all the way to a judge, and the judge said, basically, don't call us we will call you.

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Someone has to be financing the Military Industrial Money Monopoly Complex other than my tax payments, and I don't get anything in return. I don't even get the Social Security I thought was an insurance policy taken out on my behalf in the event that I got sick. Which is what happened, and I went all the way to a judge, and the judge said, basically: Don't call us, we will call you.

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