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bear,
AS WAS:
You have explained, right there, that which is genuine "democracy" or "mob rule" as the counterfeiters are apt to call it.
changed to:
You have explained, right there, that which is genuine "democracy" (or "mob rule" as the counterfeiters are apt to call it).
The change is an improvement to me. The genuine democracy is voluntary, and the counterfeit version of democracy is involuntary, or in other words there is a free market version in Liberty and there is a criminal version.
How much would electricity cost if every bomb, missile, military base overseas, solider, food, clothing, supplies shipped overseas, was turned back in time, all the way back to the decision to invade Pennsylvania by Washington in 1794, and instead of that investment in maintaining the Money Monopoly Fraud business, all that POWER was exclusively spent on making Solar Panels, how much would electricity cost per Kilowatt/Hour now?
Modified as follows:
How much would electricity cost if every bomb, missile, military base overseas, solider, food, clothing, supplies shipped overseas, was turned back in time…all the way back to the decision to invade Pennsylvania by Washington in 1794…and instead of that investment in maintaining the Money Monopoly Fraud business, what if all that POWER was exclusively spent on making Solar Panels? ow much would electricity cost per Kilowatt/Hour now?
I don't know if the typo is only a Forum typo or a typo in the book word file, the sentence is improved (in my opinion) otherwise.
"If all the Trillions of Dollars Spent on keeping the Monopoly Money Fraud Power maintained (destroying so much in that effort) was spent only on Solar Panels, nothing else, and sold at cost or "given" away -- instead of all that actual, measurable, destruction -- there would be how much production measurable as electricity and whatever was made with electricity?
I want to know why double dashes are used instead of triple periods or parenthesis or comas or single dashes.
1.
"given" away -- instead of all that actual, measurable, destruction -- there would
2.
"given" away...instead of all that actual, measurable, destruction...there would
3.
"given" away (instead of all that actual, measurable, destruction) there would
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"given" away, instead of all that actual, measurable, destruction, there would
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"given" away - instead of all that actual, measurable, destruction - there would
Is that the first incidence of using -- ?
I saw improvements in some long sentences with ... replacing comas.
Some of these grammar improvements I am picking up on, but the two dashes are new enough for me to ask for clarification or a link, please.
I hope all is well in bear world.
It is like an education. You buy a book, with your time spent reading it carefully, like the Bible I suppose, (there are very valuable things in the Bible) to help make life much richer.
modified as follows:
It is like an education. You buy a book, and with your time spent reading it carefully, you hope to help make life much richer. (Like the Bible I suppose, there are very valuable things in the Bible.)
I wonder about the need for parenthesis with the long sentence divided into two smaller sentences?
If you buy one solar panel in so many years, you can buy two, and then in so many years you can buy four, and then sixteen…It is a very long term investment…like buying a house, or buying a farm, or buying a productive business.
Is "...It" supposed to be capitalized?
I see you are now working on this, and I know it is very tiring work for me, so I hope you are not suffering through it too much. If you want I can take the file and work on it awhile. I can try to use your routine corrections as far as I know at this point.
Joe,
Do people find winning lottery tickets in the garbage can?
bear,
I don't know, but that sounds like a minor increase in the odds of winning, since the odds of winning are very high, and then adding the odds of finding a lottery ticket in the garbage is even more "lucky" with even higher odds against winning.