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| Posted: Mon Jul 1st, 2013 11:57 pm |
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7/1/13 page 73 If we were farmers and we found out our soil was gaining aluminum, barium, and other things, and that the PH was turning acidic. Would hoping that it goes away do any good? Combined into single sentence as the first sentence seems incomplete to me: If we were farmers and we found out our soil was gaining aluminum, barium, and other things, and that the PH was turning acidic, would hoping that it goes away do any good?
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| Posted: Tue Jul 2nd, 2013 12:00 am |
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7/1/13 page 73 I can't get far from the obvious solutions and I have my own competitive ideas as to how to accomplish those solutions. 1. End the FED 2. End the IRS 3. Bring the Troops Home Added comma and changed period to colon: I can't get far from the obvious solutions, and I have my own competitive ideas as to how to accomplish those solutions: 1. End the FED 2. End the IRS 3. Bring the Troops Home
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| Posted: Tue Jul 2nd, 2013 12:02 am |
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7/1/13 page 73 "So, Joe, what can we do about it? How can we get enough American’s to wake up over night?" Removed apostrophe "So, Joe, what can we do about it? How can we get enough Americans to wake up over night?"
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| Posted: Tue Jul 2nd, 2013 12:05 am |
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7/1/13 page 74 Liberty works one way (many competitive ways). Legal Crime works another way (obey or else). Changed parenthesis to colon: Liberty works one way: many competitive ways. Legal Crime works another way: obey or else.
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| Posted: Tue Jul 2nd, 2013 12:08 am |
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7/1/13 page 74 When the Friends of Liberty fight Legal Criminals the Legal Criminals are the offenders, and the Friends of Liberty are the Defenders, if it comes to that, and it has in the past, so this is not NEWS. added and removed comma: When the Friends of Liberty fight Legal Criminals, the Legal Criminals are the offenders and the Friends of Liberty are the Defenders, if it comes to that, and it has in the past, so this is not NEWS.
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| Posted: Tue Jul 2nd, 2013 12:09 am |
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7/1/13 page 74 In a dark room there will be a lot of stumbling around? Added comma: In a dark room, there will be a lot of stumbling around?
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| Posted: Tue Jul 2nd, 2013 12:13 am |
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7/1/13 page 74 The buildings were losing money, so they had to be destroyed. The people who destroyed them made a profit, and the fact that they destroyed them with a lot of people in them was even more profitable for the criminals who destroyed them since they could then make money on the aggressive wars for profit that were launched by falsely blaming innocent people for the crime of destroying those building while people were still in 2 of them. The third building was evacuated. Broke into an additional sentence and pluralized building: The buildings were losing money, so they had to be destroyed. The people who destroyed them made a profit. The fact that they destroyed them with a lot of people in them was even more profitable for the criminals who destroyed them since they could then make money on the aggressive wars for profit that were launched by falsely blaming innocent people for the crime of destroying those buildings while people were still in 2 of them. The third building was evacuated.
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| Posted: Tue Jul 2nd, 2013 12:16 am |
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7/1/13 page 74 Afghanistan was on the list of places to destroy with aggressive war because of the opium that is grown in Afghanistan and because of the need to use the place to transport petroleum products, oil and natural gas, through it. Changed commas to parenthesis to alert the reader that a list of 3 items is not being introduced: Afghanistan was on the list of places to destroy with aggressive war because of the opium that is grown in Afghanistan and because of the need to use the place to transport petroleum products (oil and natural gas) through it.
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| Posted: Tue Jul 2nd, 2013 12:20 am |
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7/1/13 page 74 The demolition of those buildings on that day was a classic case of a False Flag operation. No different than dressing up as Indians, slaughtering White Settlers, blaming the slaughter of White Settlers on the neighboring Indians so as to slaughter the Indians and then take over control of the land that is occupied by the Indians. Modified as follows: The demolition of those buildings on that day was a classic case of a False Flag operation. No different than dressing up as Indians, slaughtering White Settlers, and blaming the slaughter of White Settlers on the neighboring Indians in order to slaughter the Indians to then take over control of the land that is occupied by the Indians.
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| Posted: Tue Jul 2nd, 2013 12:23 am |
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7/1/13 page 75 It is an unambiguous case of willful premeditated murder for profit. Added comma according to Rule 6 at http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/607/02/ : It is an unambiguous case of willful, premeditated murder for profit.
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| Posted: Tue Jul 2nd, 2013 12:25 am |
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7/1/13 page 75 If you were on a Jury, a real Jury not a counterfeit one, you could ask anyone whose profession is relevant to the case, and you could judge the case on professional evidence discovered during the case, and then actual people could be held accountable for those crimes. Added parenthesis: If you were on a Jury (a real Jury, not a counterfeit one), you could ask anyone whose profession is relevant to the case, and you could judge the case on professional evidence discovered during the case, and then actual people could be held accountable for those crimes.
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| Posted: Tue Jul 2nd, 2013 07:37 am |
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"The person I was talking to seemed to listen" bear, That looks a lot better. I remember having trouble with that message, so your improvement is very obvious to me.
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| Posted: Tue Jul 2nd, 2013 07:40 am |
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"Again, to me, your vote for Romney is pathetic compared to the flow of Federal Reserve Notes that flow from you and all the other honest productive people…flowing to Legal Crime Central, so..." I like that improvement. It flows.
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| Posted: Tue Jul 2nd, 2013 12:05 pm |
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JOEIf the game Monopoly was combined with the game Risk what would the skills being developed be with that combination? I believe in my editing work yesterday, I came across the answer to that question: "No different than dressing up as Indians, slaughtering White Settlers, and blaming the slaughter of White Settlers on the neighboring Indians in order to slaughter the Indians to then take over control of the land that is occupied by the Indians." --Joe Kelley i.e. money interest combined with military interest used by Legal Criminals...except some of their crimes are not Legal, but very well covered up, as in dressed up in costume...and the innocent white settlers and the innocent native Indians pay the cost as they are made scarce so that a new crop of white settlers and marauders can be fostered and reaped for a scarce gain. -- bear And add lib words from Joe coming to the front of bear's memory: What if all the money sunk into scarcity was directed towards investments in abundance? OK Joe, now bear must get to work. I am sorry the 1776 thing didn't work out. But what I am not understanding is what difference does it make whether people talk back or make comments? Maybe seeds are planted. Maybe those seeds take hold and form new thought patterns in the readers. You may never personally know the benefit of your words left as seeds, but if people benefit, what difference does it make if it is one-way communication? Or maybe I am not understanding correctly.
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| Posted: Tue Jul 2nd, 2013 12:16 pm |
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7/2/13 page 76 “No faith is not earned. Ephesians 2: 8 - 9 (quoting so may not be perfect) “For by grace are ye saved THRU FAITH AND THAT NOT OF YOURSELVES, IT IS A GIFT OF GOD, NOT OF WORKS, LEST ANY MAN SHOULD BOAST.” Faith is a gift. We will not stand in our own merit. It will all be of God. I will not be able to stand there in his presence and say, “Look what I have done to get here.” Joe the point is: I can't get there alone. I am without hope in this world without Christ.” That answer to that question is added to this book, because my ears can listen, but I am only one lost soul. [Joe: addition to original] Modified: bear: “No, faith is not earned, it is a gift: Ephesians 2: 8-9 (quoting so may not be perfect) For by grace are ye saved THRU FAITH AND THAT NOT OF YOURSELVES, IT IS A GIFT OF GOD, NOT OF WORKS, LEST ANY MAN SHOULD BOAST. "Faith is a gift. We will not stand in our own merit. It will all be of God. I will not be able to stand there in is presence and say, ‘Look what I have done to get here.’ Joe the point is: I can't get there alone. I am without hope in this world without Christ.” (That answer to that question is added to this book, because my ears can listen, but I am only one lost soul. --Joe)
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| Posted: Tue Jul 2nd, 2013 12:22 pm |
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7/2/13 page 76 I don't know. I am not God. I have to question my own judgment, failure to do so is ludicrous, deceitful, threatening, and can place me in violent situations: if I am not careful enough to question my own judgment where and when I can still afford to do so in time. Broke into additional sentence: I don't know. I am not God. I have to question my own judgment. Failure to do so is ludicrous, deceitful, threatening, and can place me in violent situations: if I am not careful enough to question my own judgment where and when I can still afford to do so in time.
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| Posted: Tue Jul 2nd, 2013 12:26 pm |
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7/2/13 page 76 "I suppose jackals and piranhas yell fire…and thinking of it from your welcome explanation given by Solzhenitsyn, it is to silence competition whereby ectropy would exist?" Modified for readability: "I suppose jackals and piranhas yell fire…and thinking of it from your welcome explanation given by Solzhenitsyn, fire is yelled to silence competition whereby ectropy would exist?"
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| Posted: Tue Jul 2nd, 2013 01:14 pm |
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bear,What if all the money sunk into scarcity was directed towards investments in abundance? OK Joe, now bear must get to work. Feedback is how I learn how to communicate both ways. How can I learn if I can't listen to feedback? What is the nature, the substance, and the form of the resistance to feedback? What blocks the flow of information? In the case of the 1776 Web Site, who knows, I don't, they stopped replying to me. As to the use of power to make power abundant there are obvious accurate measures is stark contrast to the opposite, once those filters, like sun glasses, are used when looking around. What is love? What is hate?
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| Posted: Tue Jul 2nd, 2013 02:30 pm |
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7/2/13 page 77 The problem with connectivity is such that destructive things can travel as well as productive things, and if someone were to confuse destructive things with productive things, they may BLAME the medium of exchange, because they fail to judge the stuff being transferred accurately. Removed comma before because: The problem with connectivity is such that destructive things can travel as well as productive things, and if someone were to confuse destructive things with productive things, they may BLAME the medium of exchange because they fail to judge the stuff being transferred accurately.
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| Posted: Tue Jul 2nd, 2013 02:44 pm |
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What is love? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uvgILBGcavQ or https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pra8Rktk40I Feedback is how I learn how to communicate both ways. How can I learn if I can't listen to feedback? When does one teach? When does one learn? What is the goal? End the Fed & IRS and bring the troops home? What is the goal of the folks at 1776?
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