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| Posted: Sat Jul 13th, 2013 12:14 am |
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7/13/13 page 103 Nice, very nice, link to Ron Paul - thanks a million – in that link are precious ideas well communicated by Ron Paul. modified as follows: Nice! Very nice link to Ron Paul -- thanks a million -- in that link are precious ideas well communicated by Ron Paul.
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| Posted: Sat Jul 13th, 2013 11:10 am |
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7/12/13 page 104 So, if you are moral, human, a person with a conscience, then the deliberate, willful, murder of babies is a self-governing thing first, then a family thing, then a religious thing. Why would there ever be a demand for a city ordinance, let alone a state law, let alone a supposed "National" law, or a Global Law? modified as follows: So if you are moral, human, a person with a conscience, then the deliberate willful murder of babies is a self-governing thing first, then a family thing, and then a religious thing. Why would there ever be a demand for a city ordinance, let alone a state law, let alone a supposed "National" law, or a Global Law?
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| Posted: Sat Jul 13th, 2013 11:15 am |
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bear Guest
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7/12/13 page 104 They may actually eat babies like Alex Jones reports. added comma and changed the word like to as (to separate eating babies from like Alex Jones to ensure that the word reports is noted in the mind of the reader: to make sure the reader does not confuse Alex Jones as the person who eats babies). They may actually eat babies, as Alex Jones reports.
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| Posted: Sun Jul 14th, 2013 05:45 pm |
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Joe Kelley Administrator
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bear, You work is helping me learn punctuation so I prefer that you continue. So, you tell me. Do you want to work with Joe Quotes abit? Your punctuation may be much richer than mine as you know exactly what is in your mind, or you can wait till I finish and improve the product after I have finished. At whatever pace works best for you, it is the pace that works for me, and if you get to the point where it is too much work, then that would be a time when you have reached your limit of generosity on this work which helps me. If you can keep working on it, then I can keep learning by your example.
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| Posted: Sun Jul 14th, 2013 11:27 pm |
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JoeAt whatever pace works best for you, it is the pace that works for me, and if you get to the point where it is too much work, then that would be a time when you have reached your limit of generosity on this work which helps me. If you can keep working on it, then I can keep learning by your example. Thank you, your words help me as I work towards the goal of finishing. I have learned to pick up the book and work when I have downtime which seems to be very limited this summer. So, I will work a little while tonight until I need to stop. This new med I take a night makes me tired and ready to sleep, but it also provides me with energy for the next day. It works out well because I used to have to take benedryl at nite to ward of the prozac insomnia, now I take the new med instead of the benedryl and it seems to be a perfect balance, so far. I am thankful.
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| Posted: Sun Jul 14th, 2013 11:40 pm |
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bear Guest
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7/14/13 page 105 Joe, please check out the note below in the information about the change in case I made an error in judgement. Then you have a State, or mini-Democratic Federal Government, where the State is employed to secure Liberty against large armies of criminals, and if one State isn't big enough to fend off the very large army of criminals, then maybe 13 Separate States can manage to throw out the largest criminal army on the planet. That actually happened under The Articles of Confederation. Changed commas to parenthesis to help with readability of long sentence and added the word will to focus back on the action of the previous paragraph. If this isn't correct, please tell me. Preceding paragraph followed by edited paragraph: It isn't any business of the Federal Employees to dabble in local murders of babies or Churches full of people in Waco. They are hired to deal with very large criminal armies, and if they can't do that right, then fire them. Then you will have a State (or mini-Democratic Federal Government) where the State is employed to secure Liberty against large armies of criminals, and if one State isn't big enough to fend off the very large army of criminals, then maybe 13 Separate States can manage to throw out the largest criminal army on the planet. That actually happened under The Articles of Confederation.
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| Posted: Sun Jul 14th, 2013 11:50 pm |
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bear Guest
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7/14/13 page 105 Why is it a concern of anyone hired at the State level or even the Federal level, or even the World level, if a single woman is somehow convinced that it is a good idea to murder a baby? moved commas: Why is it a concern of anyone hired at the State level, or even the Federal level, or even the World level if a single woman is somehow convinced that it is a good idea to murder a baby?
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| Posted: Mon Jul 15th, 2013 12:12 am |
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7/14/13 page 106 Common sense, sure, I get that too. It isn't about pushing babies in front of you on the conveyor going into the meat grinder, so as to buy another day of terrible and miserable life on earth. It is about life being precious enough to preserve and reproduce, to increase the quality and lower the cost, for eternity, or at least another minute. edited as follows: Common sense, sure, I get that too. It isn't about pushing babies in front of you on the conveyor going into the meat grinder so as to buy another day of terrible and miserable life on earth. It is about life being precious enough to preserve and reproduce, to increase the quality and lower the cost for eternity, or at least another minute.
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| Posted: Mon Jul 15th, 2013 07:45 am |
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Joe Kelley Administrator
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bear, Looks great to me there: 7/14/13 page 105 Joe, please check out the note below in the information about the change in case I made an error in judgement.
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| Posted: Mon Jul 15th, 2013 07:33 pm |
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7/15/13 page 106 I thought we covered this, but maybe not, as my view is such that there is a willful effort by those in POWER to destroy the will to live in their victims. This is hand and hand in harmony with destroying POWER so that the victims do not have the POWER to resist. A basic human POWER is to preserve the species, to ensure that human life goes on, and that common sense is being eroded, being destroyed on purpose. edited as follows (also note that hand and hand is hand IN hand) I thought we covered this, but maybe not. My view is such that there is a willful effort by those in POWER to destroy the will to live in their victims. This goes hand in hand in harmony with destroying POWER so that the victims do not have the POWER to resist. A basic human POWER is to preserve the species, to ensure that human life goes on. That common sense is being eroded and being destroyed on purpose.
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| Posted: Mon Jul 15th, 2013 07:45 pm |
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7/15/13 page 106 Depression probably hits women more than men because women are designed better at nurturing babies, which is a stronger POWER to preserve human life compared to men. So...the effort to destroy that drive, in many ways, very scientifically perfected methods, to destroy that drive to live as individuals, and that drive to perpetuate the species, probably hits women much harder than men. Edited as follows: Depression probably hits women more than men because women are designed better at nurturing babies, which is a stronger POWER to preserve human life when compared to men. So...the effort to destroy that drive in many ways, very scientifically perfected methods to destroy that drive to live as individuals, and that drive to perpetuate the species, probably hits women much harder than men.
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| Posted: Mon Jul 15th, 2013 07:50 pm |
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7/15/13 page 106 Joe, tell me what you think about the way I changed the hyphens in man made and criminal man. I don't know if it looks too goofy, but I wanted to link the word man to criminal, and I may be coloring too far outside the lines. (I also want to say that I just went back and edited this comment to you to put a comma before "and I may." I have been wanting to tell you, and this may be the way to do it, that I understand while I am editing that you were speaking to me conversationally as we discussed back and forth and sometimes, punctuation is not on the front burner...as I am now noting that I had not correctly punctuated this present request I have made of you to check my hyphens. I remember when I first started discussing with you. I used to go back and check and check my comments to you to make sure they were perfect in spelling and perfect in punctuation. As we continued to discuss, I became less and less concerned about my writing perfection and more concerned with the words I was receiving from you and the discussion at hand.) It is not natural, it is man-made, criminal man-made, unnatural destruction of the will to live, and the will to perpetuate the species. It is easy to see once you know how it works. Modified as follows: It is not natural. It is man-made, criminal-man made, unnatural destruction of the will to live, and the will to perpetuate the species. It is easy to see once you know how it works.
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| Posted: Mon Jul 15th, 2013 08:01 pm |
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7/15/13 page 106 So...absent that Legal Crime culture, all those lies, and all that torture, and all that murder for 200 years, at least: absent that, would it not make sense that more people would care a little more if someone they knew was contemplating the murder of a baby? Modified as follows: So...absent that Legal Crime culture -- all those lies, all that torture, and all that murder for 200 years, at least -- absent that: would it not make sense that more people would care a little more if someone they knew was contemplating the murder of a baby?
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| Posted: Mon Jul 15th, 2013 08:11 pm |
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7/15/13 page 106 Let's dress the kids that we didn't abort up in uniforms and see if they can lower our gas prices? War costs can be paid by the children I failed to abort since war is good for my economy? added italics Let's dress the kids that we didn't abort up in uniforms and see if they can lower our gas prices? War costs can be paid by the children I failed to abort since war is good for my economy?
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| Posted: Mon Jul 15th, 2013 08:30 pm |
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bear, wrote: I don't know if it looks too goofy That looks perfect. criminal-man made If you have extra free time check this out: Bill Black Gresham's Dynmanic Blood on their hands = criminal-man We can discuss and manage to find agreement with a high degree of effectiveness compared to many competitive examples of effort to do the same. Why?
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| Posted: Mon Jul 15th, 2013 09:52 pm |
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7/15/13 page 107 "Thus, liberty is dependent upon protecting life while it is that same jeopardizing of liberty resulting in despotism that causes the demise of life." Say what??????????????????Joe, does that sentence or the new sentence even make any sense at all? I don't even know what in the world I think I thought I knew??? ...I now ask myself, does jeopardizing liberty result in despotism or is it despotism that causes liberty to be jeopardized? Can such a novice as me even make such a claim? I think I was trying to say in too many words what Ron Paul said in just a few: If we don't protect life we cannot protect liberty (or something like that). "Thus, liberty is dependent upon protecting life, and it is the jeopardizing of that same liberty which results in despotism causing the demise of life."
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| Posted: Mon Jul 15th, 2013 10:43 pm |
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7/15/13 page 107 bear is at a place I was - not long ago - and I truly fear for her as there were extreme feelings of horror to endure on this path of realizing a more accurate perception of current political economy; bear does have the advantage of a safe place. changed dashes from single to double for consistency. And if we choose to go with single dashes, that is fine by me. You already had these single dashes before I started with the double dashes... bear is at a place I was -- not long ago -- and I truly fear for her as there were extreme feelings of horror to endure on this path of realizing a more accurate perception of current political economy; bear does have the advantage of a safe place.
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| Posted: Mon Jul 15th, 2013 10:48 pm |
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7/15/13 page 107 Joe, could you please verify whether the word between Master and Slave should be OF or OR. In your original comment it was written OF (Master of Slave): http://www.dailypaul.com/comment/2861226%5D Sometime along the way it was changed to OR (Master or Slave). So, I just want to be sure the correct word is in place. (I was looking to see if there was a question mark following the statement in the original comment when I noticed the change from OF to OR.
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| Posted: Mon Jul 15th, 2013 10:51 pm |
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bear Guest
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7/15/13 page 107/108 Changed lengthy (Solzhenitsyn)32 quote from using quote marks to block quote format.
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| Posted: Mon Jul 15th, 2013 10:55 pm |
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bear Guest
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7/15/13 page 108 It does not always, not necessarily, openly throttle the throat, more often it demands from its subjects only an oath of allegiance to falsehood, only complicity in falsehood. (Solzhenitsyn)32 Changed placement of the footnote number: It does not always, not necessarily, openly throttle the throat, more often it demands from its subjects only an oath of allegiance to falsehood, only complicity in falsehood.32 (Solzhenitsyn)
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