Joe Kelley
Administrator
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Return e-mail (and my response) cut and pasted:
Hi Helium,
I am sending this email to inform you that your declining my submission is being published on my own web site.
I am cutting and pasting this entire e-mail. What you find to be too general or vague is precise and specific to me. I won't bother submitting anything more to you and yours.
Joe
-----Original Message-----
From: help@helium.com [mailto:help@helium.com]
Sent: Thursday, July 12, 2007 3:01 AM
To: josf.kelley@verizon.net
Subject: Helium asks you to revise your article
Hi Joe Kelley,
Helium.com is sending this email to inform you that your submission was declined because it is too general or vague. However, we encourage you to consider revising this:
Title: Energy Currency
When a new title joins Helium™, it initiates an entire article group. To do this effectively, the title must be specific enough to invite others to understand and write to the issue or topic so there can be effective comparisons in the peer rating process. If an article includes too many points of focus, it is difficult to title effectively. An article that is too general should be broken up into several different and more focused articles. Or, you may need to just choose one focus and develop one point more thoroughly.
For help in understanding Helium's quality needs, please read our Writing Standards (http://corp.helium.com/about/help.aspx?chapter=Tips§ion=heliumwritingstandards). There are more writing tips collected in the Writer's Workshop forum (http://www.helium.com/smf/index.php?board=5.0) on the Helium community discussion boards.
You can resubmit your revised article by repeating the "initiate a new article title" process. To do this, click the "Write" button in the top Helium navigation bar. At the next screen, use the drop down boxes to select an appropriate channel for your piece, then click on the words "Initiate a new article title" near the bottom of the page. The following screen is where you can enter your revised article. Please remember to begin your title with the word "Resubmit" in the "Write a New Title" field so our editors can give it special attention. (For example, "Resubmit: How to write an article")
You can find your submission enclosed in this email and access it in your My Helium: My Articles area.
If you have more questions, please forward this email with your comments to content@helium.com.
Thank you for working with us to help Helium rise! We value the wisdom you have to share.
All the best,
The Helium Team5
Title: Energy Currency
Article: Man Discovers Energy Currency
A meme is a shared perspective and the meme guides or enables action on a specific path. An example of a meme is religion. These are words. A meme, or shared perspective, exists before words are spoken or written. The shared perspective can be true and therefore constructive or false and destructive. A new meme begins now.
Man discovered currency. Man discovered energy. Now man discovers energy currency. Energy Currency, like religion, exists. No one can deny the fact without delving into falsehood, selective perception, delusion, and preferred ignorance. The actions inspired by religion include both constructive and destructive actions. The actions inspired by Energy Currency can be constructive and destructive too.
When religion is used as an excuse to injure and enslave, then, this practice is false; a perversion of the meme called religion. Call this what you will. I call it crime. Crime is another meme. When the meme of religion is purposefully confused to promote crime, again, true is made false. When energy is made scarce, on purpose, the effort is driven by greed, falsehood, and a desire to injure and enslave mankind. The meme of Energy Currency can be falsified, just like religion can be falsified, for evil and destruction.
Man will discover the truth about Energy Currency as man does discover the truth about religion. Both are current events. Both move along in time. Life is a process. The reader may be wondering, at this time, where this current process is leading. Some may already know the truth.
Economic falsehood, like religious falsehood, can be very destructive to human existence. It is past time to discover the nature of Energy Currency on a level of knowing where everyone knows the truth concerning Energy Currency. When that point is reached, where many (enough) people know the truth about Energy Currency, at that time in the process of human life, our species will turn a corner from despair to hope and from misery to prosperity - like a light bulb turned on in a dark room.
This is simpler than you may currently think and certainly less confusing than you have been led to believe. The false religion of economics has led people to believe that power is bad. The falsehood of economics drives people to limit their investments toward creating more power. Too much power, according to the big, very big, economic lie, is bad. Too much power is bad.
That is a lie.
The lie is created as a means of limiting your power while those who use the lie increase their power. The criminals know the secret of Energy Currency. The discovery of Energy Currency is no longer a secret. You will know the secret now. Listen carefully and ask question (process the information accurately) if you have questions.
The greater the supply of Energy Currency the greater will be the PURCHASING POWER of that form of currency.
Demand it and you will get it.
When the supply of Energy Currency reaches excess, then, costs will reach zero.
When costs reach zero; prices will be dictated by human laborers.
If that is too much for you to handle, then, you are suffering from falsehood. The political/economic criminals know these facts and they will lose their power over you when Energy Currency becomes a powerful meme guiding human action back toward truth and true religion; because - the truth will set you free.
Note: On the Helium site their motto is: Knowledge rules.
I think they mean: Falsehood rules
I really don't care to have my work published on their site when their 'rulers' censor in this manner. My work didn't make it past the trolls under the bridge; as far as I am concerned. These people, pretending to be able to discriminate accurately between what is too general and what is expressly focused upon something specifiic, are people who will learn, as everyone will, what is energy currency.
Had I elaborated - the verdict would have been a charge of verbosity.
They have some learning to do.
Last edited on Thu Jul 12th, 2007 12:17 pm by Joe Kelley
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