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| Posted: Thu Jun 20th, 2013 05:06 pm |
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6/20/13 page 63/64 The "big picture" is built up over time as all the little pictures work out over and over again and again in similar ways. This lie, you see, does that, you see. This fact, you see, works this way, you see. I'm telling you, it becomes very simple over time. You begin to see patterns, like learning how music works. You begin to see, oh yeah, that works that way. You see as I am now seeing with your help, that this "big picture" stuff is all well documented in scripture. It is the same stuff, lies are bad. OK, common sense stuff. Liars injure people. Wow! Who would have thought such things! ...on and on… Modified punctuation (again) for readability...I find myself correcting my corrections... The "big picture" is built up over time as all the little pictures work out over and over, again and again, in similar ways. This lie, you see, does that, you see. This fact, you see, works this way, you see. I'm telling you, it becomes very simple over time. You begin to see patterns…like learning how music works. You begin to see, oh yeah, that works that way. You see, as I am now seeing with your help, that this "big picture" stuff is all well documented in scripture. It is the same stuff: lies are bad. OK, common sense stuff: liars injure people. Wow! Who would have thought such things! ...on and on…
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| Posted: Thu Jun 20th, 2013 05:12 pm |
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bear Guest
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Joe, I am having this thought once again, and need your help I would like to capitalize the first letter of scripture = Scripture. But when that word appears in your words and I do not want to change the way you think about or say things. Some people, I think purposefully (not so much out of ignorance), but to make a point, type Bible as bible without capitalizing the first letter so as it lower that book to be less than what it is. I do not think you do that with the word scripture, but you type it starting iwth a lower case letter. I am used to seeing scripture written as Scripture. Just like God is God, not god. Just tell me either way, and I will change or not change accordingly that word when it appears in your words.
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| Posted: Thu Jun 20th, 2013 05:14 pm |
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bear Guest
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6/20/13 page 64 Other people are infected. They need help. Your initial response may be to defend against them, but that does not help anyone, so what happens? You learn? Broke into an additional sentence: Other people are infected. They need help. Your initial response may be to defend against them, but that does not help anyone. So what happens? You learn?
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| Posted: Thu Jun 20th, 2013 05:22 pm |
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6/20/13 page 64 So...discussion is a two-way, equitable, street, or path. removed 2 commas per this rule: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/607/1/ 6. Use commas to separate two or more coordinate adjectives that describe the same noun. Be sure never to add an extra comma between the final adjective and the noun itself or to use commas with non-coordinate adjective. So...discussion is a two-way, equitable street or path.
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| Posted: Thu Jun 20th, 2013 06:51 pm |
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Joe Kelley Administrator
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bear,Joe, I am having this thought once again, and need your help Please capitalize Scripture, my mistake. Do you see what I am saying? Or is this a case of a perfectionist getting "wrapped around the axel"? 1788 to Liberty Day, not yet realized at the time this book is written. ? The book sounds very interesting. I hope you are able to contact the son. It is wonderful that you have his father's words documented. That WWII generation is about gone. It is strange to me to see Vietnam guys with grey heads...they should be young as I remembered them. I found his name linked to Linkedin, but that program asks for the e-mail address, which I don't remember. I can look for a return address on the book he sent. Found Dan on Facebook and sent him a note. Yes, the young have grown old, and much of what they have learned is not recognized as being valuable, for some strange reason.
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| Posted: Thu Jun 20th, 2013 08:00 pm |
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bear Guest
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6/20/13 page 65 What if a competitor was allowed to pay you to borrow money because your use of the money was worth the risk according to the competitor since the competitor benefits indirectly by your industrious use of the power to purchase loaned to you? added a comma set and hyphens for readability: What if a competitor was allowed to pay you to borrow money because your use of the money was worth the risk, according to the competitor, since the competitor benefits indirectly by your industrious use of the power-to-purchase loaned to you?
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| Posted: Thu Jun 20th, 2013 08:08 pm |
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Joe, OK, will do. Please capitalize Scripture ------------------------ Nice! I like it! 1788 to Liberty Day, not yet realized at the time this book is written. ------------------------ I am glad you found Dan! Yes, the young have grown old, and much of what they have learned is not recognized as being valuable, for some strange reason. Perhaps...it is because they have been demonized, in the case of the Vietnam Vets, and in the case of the WWII Vets...they did the patriotic thing to do, so one would NOT dare bring up something to negate that "patriotic" thing to do? Now bear has gone from bookwork to discussion. Shame, shame on bear.  I am taking a Amitriptylin at Nite and it has done wonders for my focus, my ability to think, my organizational skills, and most of all my energy level. Hurray!
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| Posted: Fri Jun 21st, 2013 01:05 am |
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6/21/13 page 65 2. Victims of lies: where these victims don't know that the lies are lies, but the lies are believed and employed. removed colon: 2. Victims of lies where these victims don't know that the lies are lies, but the lies are believed and employed.
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| Posted: Fri Jun 21st, 2013 10:16 am |
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bear,I am taking a Amitriptylin at Nite and it has done wonders for my focus, my ability to think, my organizational skills, and most of all my energy level. Hurray! A personal story I know about involves yet another family helped greatly with the use (not abuse) of drugs whereby the child grew up miserably, dealing with behavior that was costing the child and the parents much trouble, finally at the age when the child was resorting to violence something was done, now the child is very helpful, very easy to communicate with, a joy to be around, funny, witty, and the parents have a new world to enjoy, having left behind the hell on earth. I elaborated some. Question authority, but get back to work!
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| Posted: Fri Jun 21st, 2013 03:14 pm |
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Joe, Work you say? I have been working all day picking and pitting cheeries. Now I am finally done and exhausted but am going to do some bookwork as I relieve my aching back. Thanks for sharing the story. Oh, and the Sherrifs are about town looking for a guy in a red stocking cap...even asked my boys best buds if they had seen him. Got a call from the Death March widow...so I had to make multiple calls so I could tell her what was going on. She is a mite afraid and I am afraid she has passed her fear to me so I have double checked to make sure the doors are locked. It seems there are a few guys in their 20's walking around town as of late that are unknown by the locals. Our population is around 600 sew, I mean so, "strangers" are noticed. I'm not really afraid, but I did check the locks and warned the boys...life in a small town...I am 7 blocks away from the action and have been minding my own business, but I am in the know now that there is not much to know except they are looking for a guy in a red stocking cap...Santa Claus?
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| Posted: Fri Jun 21st, 2013 03:28 pm |
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bear Guest
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6/21/13 page 65 3. Equitablists, or Friends of Liberty, and God's Children, and whoever else who are moral people, who do not use, and who are not subject to lies, threats, and violence as a means of gaining power from the targeted and innocent victims. Removed comma between use & and 3. Equitablists, or Friends of Liberty, and God's Children, and whoever else who are moral people, who do not use and who are not subject to lies, threats, and violence as a means of gaining power from the targeted and innocent victims.
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| Posted: Fri Jun 21st, 2013 03:33 pm |
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6/21/13 page 66 I'm not saying everyone is either/or 1,2,3, and nothing else, I'm saying that two goals, generally, are accomplished by people as they step into those roles listed above. replaced commas with periods after numbers and made into 2 sentences, and added colon at end: I'm not saying everyone is either/or 1. 2. 3. and nothing else. I'm saying that two goals, generally, are accomplished by people as they step into those roles listed above:
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| Posted: Fri Jun 21st, 2013 04:14 pm |
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6/21/13 page 66 1. Productive and Life Sustaining Use scarce power to make power abundant. 2. Destructive and Life Ending Use scarce power to take power from other people and use the stolen power to steal more. Added indentation (also ended definition, but was unable to figure code to show it here):
Use scarce power to make power abundant. 2. Destructive and Life Ending Use scarce power to take power from other people and use the stolen power to steal more.
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| Posted: Fri Jun 21st, 2013 04:29 pm |
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6/21/13 page 66 If you premeditate a lie knowing it is a lie, or if you employ a lie but are a "true believer" in the lie, if you commit crimes (lies, threats, violence upon the innocent), if you are a criminal in FACT, then you destroy life, in FACT, and there are easy, accurate, undeniable methods by which those FACTS can be measured as the bodies pile up, for one example: mass murder (aggressive war). Modified for readability: If you premeditate a lie knowing it is a lie; if you employ a lie but are a "true believer" in the lie; if you commit crimes (lies, threats, violence upon the innocent); if you are a criminal, in FACT; then you destroy life, in FACT. There are easy, accurate, undeniable methods by which those FACTS can be measured as the bodies pile up. For one example: mass murder (aggressive war).
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| Posted: Fri Jun 21st, 2013 04:40 pm |
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oh, how I want to discuss this concept, that which I just worked on above:If you premeditate a lie knowing it is a lie; if you employ a lie but are a "true believer" in the lie; if you commit crimes (lies, threats, violence upon the innocent); if you are a criminal, in FACT; then you destroy life, in FACT. There are easy, accurate, undeniable methods by which those FACTS can be measured as the bodies pile up. For one example: mass murder (aggressive war). Thinking about O'Connor and that concept of Criminals and that concept that the greatest Criminal is Lucifer who stole God's creation...can the innocent victims make a contract or a truce with criminals? Will Criminals abide by their contract? Or will Criminals resort to lies, threats and violence upon the innocent...even when there is a contract or truce in effect...or will Criminals always go the way of entropy disolving any possibility of ectropy? Is it wise to make a truce with a Criminal (Human) or with the Devil (Spirit)? Now Joe, I toss that out for you to mull over because the thought has crossed the bear mind. I listened to Cooper here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bKpxIjZ6m48&list=PL11E33A6AEEB2674F and the episode above as I pitted Cherries. The discussion involved the occult side of the Rise of Hitler. I don't know if Sutton discussed that or just the Walstreet side.
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| Posted: Fri Jun 21st, 2013 04:44 pm |
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Joe Kelley Administrator
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bear, I stumbled on another competitive example of someone inventing, or reinventing, ways to fight against Legal Crime. More and more I'm finding the English words being used by people in the fight moving toward Legal Crime. The criminals have taken over. Not a sound bite There is information in that video presentation that is the building blocks of something I call Despotism insurance. If you find the time to look at it you will probably recognize the concepts I've already spelled out in the illustration of the Defensive Weapon Story concerning a stun gun that records any event of using the stun gun and at the time of the event the video camera uploads the event onto the World Wide Web in real time. Of course the "police" have their dash cameras installed and in use for awhile now, but again of course those records of events are then lost, or the camera was broke, or the sun was in my eyes, or for some other reason the inculpatory evidence "disappeared". Not all cops are bad, not all soldiers are bad, not all lawyers are bad, not all judges are bad, but non-union jurors, being somewhat based upon sortition, are not by necessity on the same team reaching for the same goal as the Union Cops, Union Soldiers, Union Lawyers, and Union Judges who are paid employes of either The Devil Worshipers Union, The New World Order Money Monopoly Union, or whatever false front works best to hide the actual inculpatory facts that accurately identify the actual evil people making might right, or making their one legal money make money for them, or doing onto others before others can do onto them, or those specific people inventing producing, and maintaining Legal Crime.
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| Posted: Fri Jun 21st, 2013 04:46 pm |
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bear Guest
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6/21/13 page 66 Two other points: 1. Do not abandon victims to be further victimized by criminals. 2. Do not punish innocent people because that is, in FACT, crime. Changed "other" to "more" and indented: Two more points:
2. Do not punish innocent people because that is, in FACT, crime.
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| Posted: Fri Jun 21st, 2013 06:13 pm |
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bear Guest
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6/21/13 page 66 The Big Picture is elusive. And there are a whole lot of people who are either willfully perpetrating crimes or are following criminal orders without question. Rejoined these 2 sentences back together: The Big Picture is elusive, and there are a whole lot of people who are either willfully perpetrating crimes or are following criminal orders without question.
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| Posted: Fri Jun 21st, 2013 06:18 pm |
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bear Guest
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6/21/13 page 11 Proverbs 8:13 “The fear of the LORD is to hate evil: pride, and arrogancy, and the evil way, and the forward mouth, do I hate. was looking for something else and noticed that ending quotation mark is missing so I added it. Hopefully I haven't missed too much in editing... Proverbs 8:13 “The fear of the LORD is to hate evil: pride, and arrogancy, and the evil way, and the forward mouth, do I hate."
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| Posted: Fri Jun 21st, 2013 08:46 pm |
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bear,Hopefully I haven't missed too much in editing... I can go through it again but I won't be doing any major improvements to the structure as you are now doing. The prototype run can work as a method of gaining additional editors, and the prototype run can work as a marketing device. I am speaking with Dan Slockett now on his Father's book. I can keep you posted.
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