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 Posted: Tue May 21st, 2013 12:44 pm
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It looks like you believe the words typed by the reporter. Modern Times still exists in many forms, who says that it "did not grow beyond a village?”

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It looks like you believe the words typed by the reporter. Modern Times still exists in many forms, who says that it "did not grow beyond a village”?

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It was not labor-for-labor as in "The Labor Theory of Value." So that sentence is typically half true, failing to even touch upon the concept of TIME or ACTION. There is no mention of the COST principle; and therefore, the actual message by Warren is not simply discarded; it is falsified. Then the author claims that some THING creates a sovereign individual, which is patently absurd, because GOD creates sovereign individuals who are sovereign once they become independent beings past the stage of growth where the being, the living being, the living human being, as a child is nurtured by other people, parents, in a family, or if possible, but not likely: the child somehow manages to become independent and SOVEREIGN without parents, without a family, a real family, not a counterfeit family, a good family of good people doing good things like nurturing, not torturing, children.

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It was not labor-for-labor as in "The Labor Theory of Value." So that sentence is typically half true, failing to even touch upon the concept of TIME or ACTION. There is no mention of the COST principle; and therefore, the actual message by Warren is not simply discarded, it is falsified. Then the author claims that some THING creates a sovereign individual, which is patently absurd, because GOD creates sovereign individuals. Individuals who are sovereign once they become independent beings past the stage of growth where the being, the living being, the living human being, as a child, is nurtured by other people. Parents, in a family, or if possible but not likely, the child somehow manages to become independent and SOVEREIGN without parents, without a family, a real family (not a counterfeit family), a good family of good people doing good things like nurturing, not torturing, children.

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I have a need to measure the accuracy of my viewpoint and so I offer words intending to communicate that viewpoint.

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I have a need to measure the accuracy of my viewpoint, and so I offer words intending to communicate that viewpoint.

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The topic of prejudice arises and that thing, prejudice, or that action, prejudice, is shown as a tool: A tool for the use in perpetrating crime. Another costume: Prejudice.

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The topic of prejudice arises, and that thing: prejudice, or that action: prejudice, is shown as a tool; a tool for use in perpetrating crime. Another costume: Prejudice.

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bear: "Do you already know about this or am I telling you something new?"

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bear: "Do you already know about this, or am I telling you something new?"

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If it works to call the competition Black, while plotting evil to be done to the competition, then that works for liars.

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If it works to call the competition Black, while plotting evil to be done to the competition, then that works for liars.

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I did not get the aversion to darker skin bug, so I like it when my skin turns darker in the sun. What is the problem with darker skin?

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I did not get the “aversion to darker skin” bug, so I like it when my skin turns darker in the sun. What is the problem with darker skin?

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“Without prejudice” is a term, a pair of words in English; that may be worth knowing better.

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“Without prejudice” is a term...a pair of words in English...that may be worth knowing better.

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I did not look at the links. I prefer to stay out of those types of fights when it looks like argument for the sake of argument with prejudice against those who know better. What is the point?

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I did not look at the links. I prefer to stay out of those types of fights when it looks like argument, for the sake of argument, with prejudice against those who know better. What is the point?

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Thanks for keeping the Speer information up to date, I've been running out of time of late, barely finding time to play the guitar, and my political/economy work has been focusing on Carl Miller as I'm making a reading list.

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Thanks for keeping the Speer information up to date. I've been running out of time of late, barely finding time to play the guitar, and my political/economy work has been focusing on Carl Miller as I'm making a reading list.

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I know that a person may be born with darker skin, so they are darker skin because of their genetic make-up, a race if you will, a genetic make-up that is specific to a set of human characteristics.

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I know that a person may be born with darker skin, so they are darker skinned because of their genetic make-up, a race if you will, a genetic make-up that is specific to a set of human characteristics.

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I don't normally spend much time on this subject; hence my ignorance about someone who is called a Jew or people who call themselves Jews.

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I don't normally spend much time on this subject; hence, my ignorance about someone who is called a Jew or people who call themselves Jews.

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I don't know how to judge the future but by judging the past. So I prejudge the future based upon the past, knowing that I can be wrong

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I don't know how to judge the future, but by judging the past. So I prejudge the future based upon the past, knowing that I can be wrong.

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This is along the lines of thinking dynamically and not thinking in terms of THINGS being static: for us to use our brains as in a verb. As in “use it:” not possess it.

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This is along the lines of thinking dynamically and not thinking in terms of THINGS being static...for us to use our brains as in a verb: As in “use it,” not possess it.

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So prejudice, so defined as exemplified by insurance, is one thing. And then the idea is to use your brain to compare that one THING with a counterfeit version of it whereby the user intends to resort to deceit, threats of violence, and violence upon the targeted innocent people being targeted, and then to cover up those crimes with the word prejudice.

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So prejudice, so defined, as exemplified by insurance, is one thing. And then the idea is to use your brain to compare that one THING with a counterfeit version of it whereby the user intends to resort to deceit, threats of violence, and violence upon the targeted innocent people being targeted, and then to cover up those crimes with the word prejudice.

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The context here is my offering of words which are intending to convey specific, and not ambiguous, meaning. My intent is to convey a competitive perspective INTACT and to avoid having the competitive perspective misread, or misunderstood, so as to avoid any distortion.

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The context here is my offering of words which are intending to convey specific, not ambiguous, meaning

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And the reason I am saying that has to do with a person first checking their own mind to see if their own mind is the source of their fears as they may then be inspired to project that lie outward from within.

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And the reason I am saying that has to do with a person first checking their own mind, to see if their own mind is the source of their fears, as they may then be inspired to project that lie outward from within.

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The first stone, it turns out, is a lie. The lie enters the victim’s brain, and then the victim begins to employ the lie, believing that the lie is true; then that belief in that lie inspires evil, inspires the infected person to pass on the lie to their "friends," which is evil and deceptive. Not willfully deceptive, since the infected individual is by definition infected, a "true believer," and so the lie spreads. And who benefits?

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The first stone, it turns out, is a lie. The lie enters the victim’s brain, and then the victim begins to employ the lie, believing that the lie is true. Then that belief in that lie inspires evil, inspires the infected person to pass on the lie to their "friends," which is evil and deceptive. Not willfully deceptive, since the infected individual is by definition infected, a "true believer," and so the lie spreads. And who benefits?

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First of all we thank Jeff for my birthday present of a mobile hot spot...I can now do bookwork just about anywhere! The connection is very fast here in Columbia, MO!

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Imagine spending your whole life living a lie, and on the last day, you realize it. Poor me?

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Imagine spending your whole life living a lie, and on the last day, you realize it: Poor me?

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The original inventor of the lies, or those who know better than to actually believe the lie, and use the lie even if they have not invented the lie, benefit. Or so they calculate as their targeted victims are at each other’s throats inspired by that lie; victims growing weaker during the conflict, or the victims of the lie are separated and apart from each other, no longer benefiting from mutual benefit, whereby the lie causes either separation or conflict. Both being destructive in a relative sense, the targets grow weaker either way.

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The original inventor of the lies (or those who know better than to actually believe the lie, but use the lie even if they have not invented the lie) benefit, or so they calculate, as their targeted victims are at each other’s throats, inspired by that lie. Victims grow weaker during the conflict, or the victims of the lie are separated and apart from each other, no longer benefiting from mutual benefit, whereby the lie causes either separation or conflict. Both being destructive in a relative sense: the targets grow weaker either way.

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