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 Posted: Sat Jul 27th, 2013 11:59 am
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 Joe, let me know when you will have time with the computer, and then I will send back.  If I have down time in the next couple of days, I will read through quickly.  I am sure there are still occasions where I missed things because sometimes when I go back and look at my editing I see something I missed and then I make an editing note on that same comment and add a new date and the new edit. 

Yesterday I noted that I left work load as 2 words when I worked as one.  In my way of thinking, if words that are able are merged, it will be easier on the reader to get to the meaning of a long sentence faster.

Also, I want to make sure you saw my note here: http://www.power-independence.com/forum/view_post.php?post_id=6483

It includes something that came to mind for you to think about as a possible addition to the book.