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"Joe, I have your note for a competitive wording. I am going to call it a nite. But I want to make sure that you check the questions I had on page 27 and following. Once all of those are ironed out, I can do one of 2 things. I can send the book back to you, or read it thru again. Which would you prefer?"
I prefer that you are satisfied with having done a fine job, certainly above and beyond the call of duty from my viewpoint. If it sounds good to you I prefer that you sent it back to me and allow me the chance to go through it with at least an open channel to tax you further on possible questions I may find in the newest finished version.
Back to page 27:
7/24/13 Page 118 Joe, let me know what you think about this.
In context (abundant examples):
Fill in the blank.
Modified as follows:
In context (abundant examples):
___________________________
(Fill in the blank)
That looks good to me. Someone may get a pen and fill in the blank.
Joe, in addition to punctuation, I took a little extra artistic liberty in the last line by moving the word "now" to the end as " - right now." If you do not like it, just let me know.
The Dragon is in darkness - not in the light - so laughter, fun, profits, and good things are happening - all around - even while the Dragon works in our sleep - for now - and even while our earnings flow to specific people who are torturing and mass murdering innocent victims - right now.
That is very good in my view.
I will be away from the computer a few days, my nephew has something planned.
Thanks