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 Posted: Wed Jul 24th, 2013 08:36 pm
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 7/24/13 Page 120 Joe, see note below

The Dragon is in darkness, not in the light; so laughter, fun, profits, and good things are happening all around, even while the Dragon works in our sleep - for now - and even while our earnings flow to specific people who are now torturing and mass murdering innocent victims.

Joe, in addition to punctuation, I took a little extra artistic liberty in the last line by moving the word "now" to the end as " - right now." If you do not like it, just let me know.

The Dragon is in darkness - not in the light - so laughter, fun, profits, and good things are happening - all around - even while the Dragon works in our sleep - for now - and even while our earnings flow to specific people who are torturing and mass murdering innocent victims - right now.