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 Posted: Wed Jul 24th, 2013 02:12 pm
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I purchased the ballot access, with my own earnings, for the most part, because of Waco.

Regarding "for the most part":

Did you purchase the ballot access with your own earnings for the most part?

Or

did you do that for the most part because of Waco?

After I know your intent I can punctuate accordingly.

Thanks!


My intent there is to convey the importance of Waco on me, as the cause of my thoughts and actions contained within the "run for congress" events.

I can see how that sentence is confusing, and I am interested in knowing how you fix it.

Per our discussion the sentence was modified as follows:

I purchased the ballot access (with my own earnings) for the most part because of Waco.