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 Posted: Wed Jun 19th, 2013 11:54 pm
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The idea is to covey what I have learned up to this date, and to do so intact without any miscommunication. And the idea further involves a promise of improvement as my own limited perspective can be sharpened by competitive, side-by-side, comparison with your perspective, as you play act either side in the Chess Match constructed in that way, where two people work out a banking transaction at a Legal Equitablist Bank.

Changed covey to convey. changed punctuation and removed the word "and" at the beginning of 2nd sentence.

The idea is to convey what I have learned up to this date and to do so intact without any miscommunication. The idea further involves a promise of improvement as my own limited perspective can be sharpened by competitive, side-by-side comparison with your perspective as you play act either side in the Chess Match constructed in that way where two people work out a banking transaction at a Legal Equitablist Bank.