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 Posted: Wed Jun 19th, 2013 11:01 pm
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And if the loop closes, if the lie infects the individual, the dragon is inside, the Trojan horse is inside, and almost all hope may be lost at that point because the individual may have to depend upon something outside for help in defeating that dragon, exposing the closed loop, and returning POWER to know better back to the individual.

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And if the loop closes, if the lie infects the individual, then the dragon is inside, the Trojan horse is inside. Almost all hope may be lost at that point because the individual may have to depend upon something outside for help in defeating that dragon, exposing the closed loop, and returning POWER to know better back to the individual.