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 Posted: Wed Nov 28th, 2012 07:53 pm
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Joe Kelley

 

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 I think that your introduction could include some connecting words intending to inform the reader about gold as money since that will often be a thought in the minds of someone reading the title Gold Rules.

I also think that the first sentence can be made into a more informative message filling out a whole paragraph and references could be made to Ron Paul specifically so as to place the information in a more specific context?