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 Posted: Wed Sep 4th, 2013 10:34 am
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 Joe, there is a note above this regarding my progress.  I also have a change in my own words I would like added if it is not too much trouble or out of scope of where we are in this process of finishing Joe Quotes.

It is in this bear comment on page 28:

"I am not my own; I belong to everyone else, and this little space, this little place, I have found in writing and learning belongs to me. That may not make much sense to you, but it does to me. If that about me makes it so I am not qualified, we need to know that....

If it is possible I would like this added "to learn" after  the word qualified.

So that the words would read

"I am not my own; I belong to everyone else, and this little space, this little place, I have found in writing and learning belongs to me. That may not make much sense to you, but it does to me. If that about me makes it so I am not qualified to learn, we need to know that....