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I have yet to fail to eat the whole bowl myself, sometimes transferring the remains into a smaller bowl, and so far the fresh crunchy ingredients do not sit long enough to become soggy. The mixture does appear to become radioactive as the odor will fill the room and seep out of the skin as perspiration after consumption. I use plenty of garlic to keep the vampires away. Joe's Slaw breath is not conducive to romantic encounters with the significant other. Often, but not always, I add mixtures of hot sauces in a serving bowl and I drink the excess liquid. Unlike my mom's Coleslaw mine is not merely moist.
I am dying laughing here.
OK on a serious note, I love it! Your typing right here on your forum is sufficient. I'll cut and paste to the book after you take a look per the formatting notes below.
Yes, word only shows even font sizes, but one can type the font size they wish, such as 15 in the font size area and hit enter and the text (assuming the text has already been highlighted) will change to the custom size. If my memory serves me right one can even put in 15.5, but I don't have the document open to check my memory at the moment.
I now in the process of sending the doc back.
I made the following format modifications: changed bear words to size 15 as well as exactly 15pt line spacing.
I would like you to look at the first two chapters page by page as I have made some format changes that I will do throughout if you like the appearance.
Removed a return under the Joe quote and also added
~ ~ ~
beneath the quote at the top as well as before bear quotes to show the discussion moving along as you answer to bear words.
Also on the first page of the first 2 chapters I have bolded the Point/Counterpoint/Discussion headings.
So, I would like you to look at those things and tell me if it is overworked according to Joe eyes.
I will send the doc now. Just look at it and send it back with comments about the changes...whether or not their a appearance is a go ahead or not.
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