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 Posted: Thu Jul 25th, 2013 10:53 am
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If all the victims knew better they would stop being victims, they would not wait, and they would suddenly, and irrevocably, choose a more powerful option.

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If all the victims knew better, they would stop being victims, they would not wait, and they would suddenly, and irrevocably, choose a more powerful option.