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 Posted: Thu Jul 18th, 2013 08:08 pm
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I spoke to the voters assembled on a few occasions, and I did so without stumbling over my words, and afterwards there were some occasions whereby people shook my hand and thanked me for having made the effort.

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I spoke to the voters assembled on a few occasions, and I did so without stumbling over my words, and afterwards there were some occasions when people shook my hand and thanked me for having made the effort.