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 Posted: Sat Jul 13th, 2013 11:15 am
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 7/12/13 page 104

They may actually eat babies like Alex Jones reports.

added comma and changed the word like to as (to separate eating babies from like Alex Jones to ensure that the word reports is noted in the mind of the reader: to make sure the reader does not confuse Alex Jones as the person who eats babies).

They may actually eat babies, as Alex Jones reports.