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I see you are now working on this, and I know it is very tiring work for me, so I hope you are not suffering through it too much. If you want I can take the file and work on it awhile. I can try to use your routine corrections as far as I know at this point.
I want to do what you want to do. I am happy to continue working, and I do not mind. If you want to take a stab at it, I do not mind. I do not want to stifle your creativity by doing the editing myself. Your work here:
I write much, a lot of writing each day, relatively speaking, so your help works out to be help I can use, experiment on, currently. It may take hold -- the help may take hold -- in time (or it may fade away) as the World Turns.
Looks fabulous to me. A very nice and interesting use of punctuation.
So, you tell me. Do you want to work with Joe Quotes abit? Your punctuation may be much richer than mine as you know exactly what is in your mind, or you can wait till I finish and improve the product after I have finished.
I am good with whatever you want to do. I'll keep working unless you tell me otherwise.
Earlier I said I thought I missed a comma:
Anyways, I am sure that is more than you wanted to know. I think I noticed I missed a comma in one of the rewrites that you liked. I will fix it later and let you know how it should have been after I looked at it better (if it is still what I think I read). I am in a hurry to get lunch and out the door at the moment
I went back and looked. It looked good to me this time.