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It is like an education. You buy a book, with your time spent reading it carefully, like the Bible I suppose, (there are very valuable things in the Bible) to help make life much richer.
modified as follows:
It is like an education. You buy a book, and with your time spent reading it carefully, you hope to help make life much richer. (Like the Bible I suppose, there are very valuable things in the Bible.)
I wonder about the need for parenthesis with the long sentence divided into two smaller sentences?
If you buy one solar panel in so many years, you can buy two, and then in so many years you can buy four, and then sixteen…It is a very long term investment…like buying a house, or buying a farm, or buying a productive business.
Is "...It" supposed to be capitalized?
I see you are now working on this, and I know it is very tiring work for me, so I hope you are not suffering through it too much. If you want I can take the file and work on it awhile. I can try to use your routine corrections as far as I know at this point.
Joe,
Do people find winning lottery tickets in the garbage can?
bear,
I don't know, but that sounds like a minor increase in the odds of winning, since the odds of winning are very high, and then adding the odds of finding a lottery ticket in the garbage is even more "lucky" with even higher odds against winning.