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 Posted: Tue Jul 2nd, 2013 08:01 pm
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I spent my life, my power, making rocks and sand for construction, for the most part, the productive physical part of my life. And what would I have done had I been more balanced, more productive, better, more connected with the concept of morality, productivity, spirituality?

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I spent my life, my power, making rocks and sand for construction, for the most part, the productive, physical part of my life. What would I have done had I been more balanced, more productive, better, more connected with the concept of morality, productivity, spirituality?