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 Posted: Wed Jun 19th, 2013 11:48 pm
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 6/19/13 page 63

If you have not read one of my sales pitch illustrations then you can read the one started in this thread between a fictitious John the customer, and Jane the salesperson.

Added comma between illustrations and then. Removed word "a" and removed comma between customer & and:

If you have not read one of my sales pitch illustrations, then you can read the one started in this thread between fictitious John the customer and Jane the salesperson.