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 Posted: Tue Jun 18th, 2013 10:43 pm
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 JOE, NOT SURE HOW THIS SENTENCE SHOULD READ

6/18/13 page 59 says:

Progress toward war is carefully monitored, well documented, FACT.

Should it be:

Progress toward war is a carefully monitored, well documented FACT.

or

Progress toward war is carefully monitored, a well documented FACT.