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 Posted: Mon Jun 17th, 2013 10:47 pm
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"There was a war in 1967 where a lot of nations came against Israel and Israel won and won ground."

ummm, this sounded like a 5th grader wrote it so i tried to rewrite to make bear sound a little more intelligent, at least like an 8th grader :)

"There was a war in 1967 when several nations fought against Israel. Israel won and won ground."