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 Posted: Wed May 22nd, 2013 04:43 pm
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Collective punishment is the employment of a counterfeit form of prejudice whereby criminals (with or without badges) employ prejudice to cover up their crimes as if their crimes where somehow justifiable by this tool called prejudice.

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Collective punishment is the employment of a counterfeit form of prejudice whereby criminals (with or without badges) employ prejudice to cover up their crimes, as if their crimes were somehow justifiable by this tool called prejudice.