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 Posted: Sun May 19th, 2013 11:39 pm
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 5/19/13 page 17 (also changed same way on page 19)

Can I pile more hard work on you by rewriting your sentence above so as to reinforce the new keys that you now have in your control?

"I was born 49 years ago. I only know how Legal Crime is used by individuals today. I know how Legal Crime is used by decision makers in Legal Crime."

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Can I pile more hard work on you by rewriting your sentence above so as to reinforce the new keys that you now have in your control?

"I was born 49 years ago. I only know how [Legal Crime] is used by individuals today. I know how [Legal Crime] is used by decision makers in [Legal Crime]."