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As I was beginning to edit punctuation on Joe Quote on page 17, I realized it was different from Joe Quote at the beginning of the Chapter on page 15 so I have made page 15 to reflect the quote on page 17.
page 17 read:
As with counterfeit religion (crusades, inquisition, end times) the thing being counterfeited is often opposite the genuine article, and knowing this ought to clue the person knowing this on the actual tool being counterfeited, as to why it was counterfeited, and what the genuine article was actually designed to accomplish.
changed punctuation wording to:
As with counterfeit religion (crusades, inquisition, end times), the thing being counterfeited is often opposite the genuine article. Knowing this ought to clue the person knowing this in on the actual tool being counterfeited, as to why it was counterfeited, and what the genuine article was actually designed to accomplish.