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 Posted: Sat May 18th, 2013 12:55 am
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Or more like the splattering sound that might be heard when a Tar Baby is served up at the otherwise very attractive dinner, right there on the dinner table: smack.

Where are all my workers, employees and the like, when good help is so hard to find - at a discount? Get this Tar Baby off my dinner table! What am I paying you to do?

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Or more like the splattering sound that might be heard when a Tar Baby is served up at the otherwise very attractive dinner, right there on the dinner table: smack. Where are all my workers, employees and the like, when good help is so hard to find - at a discount? Get this Tar Baby off my dinner table! What am I paying you to do?