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A fine job of improving the power to convey accurate meaning in my opinion.
I agree, Joe, you did a very fine job!
I was able to work some on the text that you so kindly provided so you may like to take a 2nd look. I moved the part about the bad bad paper money to the Gold Bugs paragraph.
I did this because I was struggling with wanting the text to be italicized, but it was in a paragraph alone and could have been confused with bear words since those words are stand alone italicized paragraphs (with quotes, though). So, see if you like the reorganization. I think it works. But I do not have your brain. You may still like to make some changes when back in your court
