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 Posted: Fri May 17th, 2013 04:23 pm
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Joe Kelley

 

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 A fine job of improving the power to convey accurate meaning in my opinion.

When it is my turn to edit I can first return here to make sure that I am not undoing something already undone, and I can learn how better to be consistent in those areas where 6 of one is worth half a dozen of the other, where it is better to keep asking for 6, or asking for half a dozen, rather than working to keep the reader's head spinning.