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 Posted: Wed May 1st, 2013 02:38 pm
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Joe Kelley

 

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The bathwater, when I employ that analogy, means the lies that cover up the violence. And the violence and the threats - all part of the bathwater; and the baby is all that can be done by people to survive and survive better without that bathwater.
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That second sentence is very poor to me.

I did this:

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The bathwater, when I employ that analogy, means the lies that cover up the violence. The violence, the threats too, are all part of the bathwater; and the baby is all that can be done by people to survive and survive better without that bathwater.
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