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| Posted: Tue Feb 26th, 2013 08:15 pm |
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kurtwaters
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I find it intriguing how thought processes differ from person to person. You have a tendency, or so it seems to me, to run too many thoughts together. Run-on sentences and trying to express two (and sometimes more) concepts simultaneously make your writing difficult to absorb. Sometimes I have to re-read a paragraph or sentence several times to make any sense of it. (Don't take offense, sometimes I have to do this with the writings of Nobel laureates.) Your addition to the definition of a lie is a good example. I see perfectly clearly why you want to add the restriction. It is important to your world view. It is important to what a lie means to you. I think, however, it will only lead to confusion. Here is what I suggest: create another word. Lie: a deliberate choice to mislead a target without notification Now, create a new word and new definition, for example: new word : using lies to effect a power transfer We should keep in mind, by the way, that maybe a word already exists in our or another language which conveys this meaning, but we are unaware of it. There are many words I do not know. I look forward to your word invention. Don't forget to use it in a sentence. I am also anxious to know whether you agree with the idea of separate definitions. Tuesdays are my Mondays so I am busy for the next five days. I will write when I can on this topic and on the free will topic. Last edited on Tue Feb 26th, 2013 08:19 pm by |
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